midsummer_fic ([info]midsummer_fic) wrote,
@ 2005-08-22 15:04:00
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for mousewrites: "Navi (Niv Sefatayim)" (Battlestar Galactica) by [info]lyra_sena
Title: Navi (Niv Sefatayim)
Author: [info]lyra_sena
Recipient: [info]mousewrites
Fandom: Battlestar Galactica
Character(s): Kara Thrace, Leoben
Summary: There is a lone prophet, with the fruit of the earth in his palm.

Navi (Niv Sefatayim)

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[info]mousewrites
2005-08-22 11:51 pm UTC (link)
Oh my god.

This is... beautiful. Touching, chilling, tactile. I adore it. It makes my teeth ache with the taste of plums.

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[info]akite
2005-08-23 12:03 am UTC (link)
Oh my goodness, yes! Too many good lines to quote, but I had to leave a comment.

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[info]one_traveller
2005-08-23 01:25 am UTC (link)
I don't have cable, so I've only seen bits and pieces of the the show. But this...this is just beautiful. I love it even though I don't understand what's going on. **Resolves to see if Blockbuster has season 1 for rent**

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[info]shayheyred
2005-08-23 01:42 am UTC (link)
HOLY CRAP!
Er..I mean...this is incredible. You've written my new favorite pairing! (Note the icon I made last week) Wow! Such rich, sensual images, too.
::flails::
Lucky Mousewrites!

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[info]sam80853
2005-08-23 02:12 pm UTC (link)
Kara/Leoben - there is NOT ENOUGH Kara/Leoben!

This is beautiful!

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[info]stormymouse
2005-08-23 07:41 pm UTC (link)
you brought so much life to my otp. the imagery is fantastic!

He stands at the edge of the forest, tree branches spread out behind him like angel’s wings.

my leoben. ::sighs::

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[info]sweetestdrain
2005-08-24 06:16 am UTC (link)
Oh, beautiful.

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[info]c_regalis
2005-08-24 11:58 pm UTC (link)
Oh, wow! This is... just... *flails*

Ever since I've seen Flesh and Bone I thought they tried to set up the human cylons as some kind of angels. Dark and cruel and very powerful angels. And what you wrote here has the same quality to it. Just more. Thank you! This is really beautiful.

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[info]korestemenos
2005-08-26 02:58 pm UTC (link)
This is beautiful. Chilling, intense and it really stayed with me after I read it. Thanks.

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[info]maryavatar
2005-08-28 06:59 pm UTC (link)
Oh God... so good :)

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[info]sageness
2005-08-29 04:10 am UTC (link)
Wow, soooo much gorgeous detail. Ok, I've only seen the miniseries and "Flesh & Bone", and this has intrigued me so much that I really want to catch up. Leoben makes a really scary-beautiful-dangerous prophet, doesn't he? I love that he totally gets Kara where she's vulnerable and how she clings to her faith in the face of everything Leoben represents. It's creepy-goodness. :)

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[info]zeplum
2005-08-29 11:05 pm UTC (link)
Just the perfect amount of creep and a pitch perfect Kara. I could probably say more, but I'm kinda geeking out over the plum. *g*

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[info]mousewrites
2005-08-30 12:02 am UTC (link)
Wow! Now that I know who wrote this, I just wanted to say Thank you! Thank you! Thank you! This is wonderful, textual, beautiful... Thank you again!

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[info]serialkarma
2005-08-30 02:53 pm UTC (link)
Oohh, sweetie, this was excellent. You got the crazy-prophet vibe of Leoben and Kara's reaction down perfectly. And there just isn't enough Leoben fic out there.*g*

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